Today I will talk about a picture that is very important to me because it shows my best friends. They are my friends since we were 11 years old. I knew them at the school.
In this picture appear Crsitina, Loreto, Melissa, Valeria, Valentina and me. I like to talk about the history of this photograph. I remember that we arranged a meeting in Loreto's house, because we were boring. It was a summer day in 2007, so we were on holidays and we decided to get together. That day we did a lot of fun things, when suddenly we thought: "we can take some photographs!", so we posed and we activated the camera's automatic mode. This picture was taken by Loreto's camera. We took a lot of photographs, but all of it was too bad. So after many attempts we took the photograph that I show here. We loved it, so from that moment, it's our official photograph .
In conlcusion I like this picture because it's nice, it remember me a precious moment of my life, and because it shows five persons very important in my life.
I hope you like it too...
And I hope that my friends don't get ungry because I put this picture in the web
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Today I will talk about a picture that is very important to me because it shows my best friends. They are my friends since we were 11 years old. I MET them at the school.
In this picture Crsitina, Loreto, Melissa, Valeria, Valentina and me APPEAR. I like to talk about the history of this photograph. I remember that we arranged a meeting in Loreto's house, because we were borED. It was a summer day in 2007, so we were on holidays and we decided to get together. That day we did a lot of fun things, when suddenly we thought: "we can take some photographs!", so we posed and we activated the camera's automatic mode. This picture was taken by Loreto's camera. We took a lot of photographs, but all of THEM WERE too bad. So after many attempts we took the photograph that I AM SHOWING here. We loved it, so from that moment, it's our official photograph .
In conCLusion I like this picture because it's nice, it remINDS me OF a precious moment of my life, and because it shows five persons very important in my life.
I hope you like it too...
And I hope that my friends don't get ungry because I put this picture in the web
GRADE:6.5